TITLE: _______________Matawaia Toilet opening.______________________________
Planning
1.Powhiri
2.Looking at the toilets
3.kaitime
Writing
¨ Haere mai , Haere mai!” The roaring sound of my nana. The roaring look on our over tempered faces stune the powhiri crowd. As the old okie smell of Matawaia marae Silky white concrete shone brightly into my dark brown eagle eye. My greedy hand furbished together. As I gently reached for the shimmered door handles.
The polished marble perfectly varnished to perfection. As a humongous roar of kids trudged in an orderly fashion. A whiff of hangi screeching past my snooty nose. The freshly tough white paint smell traveled rapidly through the corridors. As my beady eyes scanned for my cousin Jaydence
Marking
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Ranajade Mihi Paraha Henare Winiata
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Miss Baker
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